Wednesday, 16 May 2012

Timeline by David Wailing

Timeline is another short story set in the same world as Relationship Status.

I suppose it is similarish to Relationship Status in that the autos are taking over a human's life choices.  I felt this one had more tension  I read it in one sitting (well one lying as I read it in bed lol) and I was on the edge of my proverbial seat as Joanna was racing across London.

It was a decent length for a short story.  Just short of 1k locations translates to about ten thousand words.  The length was perfectly suited to this story, but I want more from Mr Wailing.

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